Friday, 10 July 2009

Dream Big




‘Live your dreams!’
they say
(with exclamation marks)
‘Reach for the moon,
at least you’ll
fall
among the stars!’

And I did.
Really.
I did.

Clinging persistently
like a lady to her illicit lover
- to what was
never hers
to begin with.

And so I fell.

Not among the stars
like they said,
but
face first
in the bloody grass.




12 remarkable observations:

N said...

Failings not that bad is it? I've failed a multitude of times...just gotta get up and keep trying:) (there's my positive thought for the day)

Sigma said...

The sound of reality is 'thump'?

Jerry said...

It's reach for the stars and you'll land on the moon, is it not?

Failure's overrated anyway. Don't let the bitch get to you. Just use loud music.

Delilah said...

lying in the grass can be pretty enjoyable. so just turn over and look up at the sky :) *hug.

gutterflower said...

Sigma, a big one. yes.

N, Jerry its not so much about failing but about wanting what you can't have. Thanks though, both of you. :) Am still very zen these days so its going good. :D
and jerry, tis reach for the moon and you'll fall among among the stars. I dunno where you heard your version of it. :P

Delilah, thats definitely one way of looking at it. you've given me some food for thought for sho. :)

Anonymous said...

its good to dream...n yeah realli big always but sometimes u gotta c life as a lotus......it has lots of sybolism attached to it- new life and death! Although I like how it is seen as having its roots in the mud and the muck and as it grows through all that muck it eventually opens & grows to reveal a beautiful flower; and thats d best part of it... Read More...no matter how dark or hard... life can be sometimes...at d end its justta experience and its the hardest times that really make u stronger..trust me ive gone through it and come out enlightened so why cant u or anyone for that matter...keep smiling....keep writing...keep dreamin...cheers

Angel said...

Hope the grass turns out to be the greenest ever!
Cheers!

St. Fallen said...

you want food for thought?
chomp on some grass :P
moo!
cow :P

gutterflower said...

anon, thanks for the comment. Drop in again. :)


Angel, thanks! I hope so too.

St. fallen, :P

Gerald said...

No. I am right. My way makes more sense. The moon comes BEFORE the stars. So it is logical to assume you will land on the moon if you go for the stars :P

gutterflower said...

Jerry, logic is not applicable in poetic license. Its a nauseatingly chirpy quote pretty widely known. I'm just saying it like I've heard it. :P



http://thinkexist.com/quotations/moon/

http://www.scrapbook.com/quotes/doc/12986/408.html

http://www.famousquotes.com/email.php?_id=1046799

http://cheerleading.about.com/b/2005/03/01/cheer-quotes-of-the-week-7.htm

:)

Jerry said...

CHEERLEADING.ABOUT.COM?!

I rest my case.

I also choose to rest my mind from checking any of the other links.
:D

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